Bright and hot,
Hatred is greater.
Burns my skin,
Love does more.
Why do I admire you so?
Is it your looks?
Your talents?
Your warmth?
Your looks hurt;
Your talents are unseen.
Your warmth only comes half the year;
Why do I admire you so?
Don't look!
Don't look!
You will become blinded;
You will become hurt.
Stay here,
In the dark.
Where it is safe;
Where the world makes sense.
But you always come back.
Not to haunt;
Not to taunt;
But to ensure life is still here.
Why do I admire you so?
Your pleasantness;
Your love;
Your hatred;
Your warmth;
Your life-giving powers.
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ReplyDeletewow.
That's really deep I like it a lot and even if I didn't know it was about Terezi, I'd still love it. This is incredible, keep writing!
Yeah! It actually is about Terezi! Thanks a lot for the comment Kierra! I LOVE your stories andd poems too!
ReplyDeleteWhoa..............-_-........ STOP BEING SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!! DAMN IT!!!
ReplyDeleteUm.....o-okay? o.O
ReplyDeleteLike this?:
The cat ran down the tree.
Only to be eaten by a dog.
The End.
I am a pacifist. But not with my words. Damn you. That was beautiful. ^_^
ReplyDeleteI'm a pacifist too. Well...in real life...on paper or online I usually write scary or morbid stories...sorry.
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